Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

As far as you know, the world is more modernized and industrialized than before. Everything like studies,
entertaining
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, work,
news
, etc have remove
in
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from
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the Internet.
News
is one of the most important things. From the young, adults,
teenagers
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and teenagers
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to the old people
also
read
news
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the news
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.
Therefore
newspapers
which contain the most significant source of
news
is
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are
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necessary. I completely agree with
this
view. People have to take the information in
newspapers
in order to put
into
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it into
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the
news
. The information in
newspapers
has been taken exactly by journalists. If they didn’t choose truly with
the
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life, the viewers would misunderstand exactly. They didn’t believe in
newspapers
so
that
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the
news
didn’t post on the Internet. The choice of information is very important that makes the source of
news
.
Newspapers
was
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written by journalists for over centuries
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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