Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

Over the past few years, more and more
people
choose to read
news
on the
Internet
because of its convenience.
However
,
people
believe that it is better to read
news
on
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the newspapers.
In my
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opinion, I completely disagree with
this
opinion and
this
essay will address
reasons
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for my view as follows There are many benefits of reading
news
on the
Internet
.
First
of all, readers will be able to have the newest
information
in
a
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fastest way. Any kind of
information
on any topic is available on the
Internet
. Thanks to the
Internet
,
people
now can easily get the newest
information
with just a few mouse clicks.
In other words
,
people
now can read
news
almost everywhere.
Moreover
, reading
news
on the
Internet
is much more convenient than
on
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a newspaper
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newspaper
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. As the
Internet
has become more and more popular, many
people
choose to get
information
on the
Internet
. They will not have to go
the
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newsstand
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news stand
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newsstand
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and buy each
one
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newspaper to know the status of the world nowadays.
This
is very convenient, especially for
people
who do not have
many
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spare time. In conclusion, while some maintain that newspapers are still the most essential source of
information
, I still believe that it is better to read
news
on the
Internet
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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