Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

More and more people read
news
on the
Internet
,
newspapers
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and newspapers
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will remain the most important source of
news
. I completely disagree that
newspapers
still become the most important source of
news
. There are some reasons why
newspapers
should be stopped.
Firstly
,
a
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paper can cause
a big rubbish
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big rubbish
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. When people read a
newspaper
, they will throw it away. And
this
will cause
polluted
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a polluted
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environment.
Secondly
, people
print
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who print
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a
newspaper
will make a lot
bad
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of bad
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things like waste
papers
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paper
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, damage
woods
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wood
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,…
Besides
, you can pay a little money to buy
a
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a newspaper
newspapers
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newspapers
, but
everyyears
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every year
every years
, every
months
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month
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, it
waste
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wastes
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a big amount of money to buy a
newspaper
.
That is
so unacceptable.
I
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amI
wasI
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still sure that
read
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reading
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news
on the
Internet
is much better.
First
, it
very
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is very
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convenient and various. It contains a lot of
source
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sources
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of
news
,
papers
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and papers
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in the world. You just stay at home and watch or read the
news
today.
Next
, the
Internet
won’t cause damage
on
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to
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environment
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the environment
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. Or you don’t need to pay money to buy something, you can stay at a place and go or read everything you like. In conclusion, you should read
news
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the news
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on the
Internet
rather than buy a
newspaper
. Because in my opinion, the
Internet
is much
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more advantage
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advantage
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advantageous
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than a
newspaper
.
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