An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialize. Some people think that this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the era of evolution and development, using the internet to keep

people

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together is a common aspect.

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,

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it is believed by some it is

people

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are

brigining

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beginning

bringing

together while others estate that social media is

dechaching

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teaching

detaching

them

socialy

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socially

society

social

. In my opinion, I think, net facilities give vast advantages to the life with communication with others. On the one hand, social media is possible

everyone

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who

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in

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abroad to meet and share ideas and

thought

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. In fact,

people

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having

same

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the same

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interest

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interests

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can interact with each other in order to

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develop

devolop

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develop

their

relationship

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relationships

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.

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, they relax their mind

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from

overload

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an overload

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of work.

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,

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couples

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copples

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couples

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might meet through social applications

such

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as

face book

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facebook

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and

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twitter

twiter

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twitter

.

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, recent research showed that social media resulted in an increase in the marriage rate

most

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of

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the

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countries.

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, the internet simultaneously, created a barrier between real physical

meet

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meeting

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people

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and

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skills practically and prefer to

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behind the

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screen

screan

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screen

.

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, they become

isolate

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and

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of

depress

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depressed

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.

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, it is noticed that the younger generation

suffer

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suffers

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from

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social

socal

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social

disorders and

choose

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to stay alone rather than interact face to face with other

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colleagues

colleges

collegues

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colleagues

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, teenagers tend to stay in their room

longer

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period

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and avoid family time to win the games. In conclusion,

nonthelss

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nonetheless

,

internet

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the internet

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makes and

mantain

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maintain

friendship and

advance

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advances

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communication

to

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in

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the

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life, but their drawbacks like social depression need to consider and take into account.