An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialize. Some people think that this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the era of evolution and development, using the internet to keep

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in one place is a common aspect, while others estate that social media is

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detaching

teaching

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them

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socially

society

. In my opinion, I think, net facilities give vast advantages to

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life

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with communication with others and receive minimal negatives into

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when

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how to maintain

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of

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. On the one hand, social media is possible

people

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for people

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who live in the same nation or live

in

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abroad to meet and share ideas and thoughts. In fact, if they have the same interest can interact with each other in order to

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develop

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develop

their relationships.

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, they relax their mind from an overload of work.

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, couples might meet through social applications nowadays,

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as

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and

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Twitter

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.

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, recent research showed that social media resulted in an increase in the marriage rate in most

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the

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countries.

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, the internet simultaneously, created a barrier between real physical

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meetings

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and improving skills practically and people prefer to communicate behind the screen.

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, they become isolated and a bit

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depressed.

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, it is noticed that the younger generation suffers from

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social

socal

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social

disorders and

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to stay alone rather than interact face to face with other colleagues.

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, teenagers tend to stay in their room for longer periods to win the games and avoid the value

family

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of family

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time. In conclusion,

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nonetheless

, the internet makes and

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better friendships and advances communication to

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,

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,their drawbacks like social depression need to consider into account, but it can minimize with fully

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the balance of

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.