Some sports are extremely dangerous for those who play them. Why do people participate in such sports? What measures could they take to minimize the risk involved?
All
of
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apply
people
prefer to play Add an article
the people
games
without age limit
. As well as, Fix the agreement mistake
limits
sports
give us a lot of benefits such
mental
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as mental
relaxations
, Fix the agreement mistake
relaxation
increase
fitness. Correct word choice
and increase
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, adventure
sports
may be life threating
. Correct your spelling
threatening
Therefore
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essay will discuss reasons for play
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playing
adventure
sports
and how keep
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to keep
safety
of players.
Some players desire to participate Add an article
the safety
for
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in
high
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high-risk
risk
games
. There are several reasons, entertainment is the
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apply
one
of
fact. Change preposition
apply
Persons
preferences differ Change the noun form
Person
from
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apply
one
by one
, when someone like safety
entertainment other
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another
one
doing
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does
high
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high-risk
risk
entertainment games
such
as hiking. As well as, sometimes adventure
sports
be a trend among youngers. Youngers do not think about further
risk
, they give their attention only for
current trend and their Change preposition
to
disires
. If mountain climbing Correct your spelling
desires
more
dangerous, they doing it to be heros.
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is more
are
no any solution to stop these Change the verb form
is
sports
but, we can get safe
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safety
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one
is safety
places for games
as an
example, Correct article usage
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is most
adventure
players and it more difficult task and high risk
. Without proper training
anyone can not Add a comma
,training
doing
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do
adventure
games
such
as climbing waterfalls. Not only the training and safety
places but also
safe wearing such
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a such
safety
guards and equipment.
In conclusion, everyone doing
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does
sports
according to own
desire. Correct pronoun usage
their own
However
, some sports
are life threating
. But people select Correct your spelling
threatening
adventure
events due to their preferences and young people select due to trend
. We can not stop our desire but we can keep our safe while playing Fix the agreement mistake
trends
such
selecting safety
places, proper training and safe wearing. Replace the word
safe
However
, personally
I believe we should avoid Add a comma
,personally
high
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high-risk
risk
games
because of
life is worth Change preposition
apply
than
everything.Correct quantifier usage
more than
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