Some sports are extremely dangerous for those who play them. Why do people participate in such sports? What measures could they take to minimize the risk involved?

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people
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prefer to play
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. As well as,
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give us a lot of benefits
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relaxations
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fitness.
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sports
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may be life
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threatening
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sports
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of players. Some players desire to participate
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high
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risk
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games
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. There are several reasons, entertainment is
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fact.
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preferences differ
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, when someone like
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entertainment
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as hiking. As well as, sometimes
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sports
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be a trend among youngers. Youngers do not think about
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risk
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, they give their attention only
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current trend and their
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desires
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dangerous, they doing it to be heros. There
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no any solution to stop these
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but, we can get
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measures to decrease injury.
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of
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thing is training. The other
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is
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places for
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example,
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most
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popular among
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players and it more difficult task and high
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. Without proper
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anyone can not
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adventure
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games
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as climbing waterfalls. Not only the training and
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places but
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safe wearing
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such
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helmet,
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guards and equipment. In conclusion, everyone
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sports
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according to
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desire.
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, some
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are life
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threatening
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events due to their preferences and young people select due to
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. We can not stop our desire but we can keep our safe while playing
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places, proper training and safe wearing.
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I believe we should avoid
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risk
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games
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life is worth
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everything.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • physical and mental boundaries
  • peer pressure
  • media influence
  • cultural norms
  • livelihood
  • extensive training
  • state-of-the-art
  • safety equipment
  • governing bodies
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  • supervision
  • risk assessment
  • emergency plans
  • minimize risks
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