Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
According to some beliefs,
music
is one
of the good ways to create communication between people
of different ages
and also
various cultures. Has this
idea ever come to your mind to link various types of people
together through music
? This
essay will discuss how this
idea come true.
On the one
hand, people
are attracted by the rhythms of the songs first
, although
they may never understand what the singer says, music
of some cultures brings a genre to mind. For instance
, Turkish music
always has romantic feelings while Italian music
has epic one
. As people
love any kind of music
then
they try to find their lyrics and also
translate them into their own language to find their original meaning. Though nations have been introduced to each other and they can find a way to share their feeling. For example
days ago, a Persian singer shared his music
on Twitter. Although
there are only 50 million Persians on Twitter, this
song has been viewed over 200 million times. And then
he could show his thoughts to many nations and many people
.
On the other hand
, music
brings many ages
together. Because listening to music
and having fun in concerts is one
the favourable leisure people
like to do in their free time, then
it can be shown that almost all members of families take part in concerts. This
is one
of the good ways to have the same experiences and the same languages that youngers can have with the elderly.
In conclusion, as gathering people
of different ages
and different cultures in one
place (which can be physical like concerts or virtual like Instagram, Twitter and so on), music
has a lot of power, maybe still some of them are unknown, to bring people
of different nations or ages
together. That's why I agree that governments should pay more attention to using this
power to introduce their country to the world and also
make intimate relations between all age classes.Submitted by selva.salimi on
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