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contemporary
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the contamporary
contamporary
era, a large number of small Correct your spelling
contemporary
shops
in the city have been replaced by big Use synonyms
malls
, due to the fact that small Use synonyms
shops
have no power to Use synonyms
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maintain
mantain
their area. Correct your spelling
maintain
Therefore
, Linking Words
government
have been contributed by giving big Add an article
the government
malls
support with regulation and authority. In my point of Use synonyms
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this
will create several Linking Words
demmerits
for small Correct your spelling
demerits
shops
which will be discussed in the following paragraph.
There are several drawbacks that people can face with Use synonyms
replecing
small Correct your spelling
replacing
shops
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Firstly
, usually small Linking Words
shops
are belonging Use synonyms
by
poor societies, Change preposition
to
which
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and
the
only income for them are from Change the word
their
saling
small commodity. Correct your spelling
selling
Hence
, small Linking Words
shops
wish that government give them Use synonyms
opportunity
to develop their own Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
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business
bussiness
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businesses
therefore
special Linking Words
regulation
for small Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
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business
bussiness
should support Correct your spelling
businesses
to
improve their income. Fix the infinitive
apply
For example
, recent research reported that many public suffer because their areas have been replaced by big Linking Words
malls
, which is they cannot earn money again, and it will increase the number of poor society.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
switch
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switching
small
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the small
shop
to big Fix the agreement mistake
shops
shops
will lead Use synonyms
bad
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to bad
habbit
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habit
young
generation, because they will spend Add an article
the young
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money and time Correct quantifier usage
a lot of
on
there. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, large Linking Words
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shopping
shoping
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shopping
mall
usually have Fix the agreement mistake
malls
advance
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advanced
amanities
, complete Correct your spelling
amenities
commodity
and good service, Fix the agreement mistake
commodities
it
will make citizens more comfortable. Correct pronoun usage
which
For example
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for
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apply
mall
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the mall
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it
will lead Correct pronoun usage
which
bad
behaviour for pupils because they cannot focus on their study, Change preposition
to bad
an
eventually the ability Correct your spelling
and
on
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to
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understand
undrestand
the subject decrease.
In conclusion, replacing small Correct your spelling
understand
store
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stores
to
big Change preposition
with
malls
will lead Use synonyms
several
drawbacks, Change preposition
to several
government
should support small Add an article
the government
store
to develop their Fix the agreement mistake
stores
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business
bussiness
by giving them Correct your spelling
businesses
loan
or Fix the agreement mistake
loans
regulation
.Fix the agreement mistake
regulations