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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back You should write at least 150 words.

#minutes #weekend #friend #house #home #coat #belongings #pockets #suggestions
DEAR KAMALA, I THINK YOU'RE GETTING WELL.
FIRSTLY
 I SHOULD MENTION ABOUT YOUR HOUSE. IT IS
EXCELLENT
Correct article usage
AN EXCELLENT
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 HOUSE AND SO BEAUTIFUL. BUT I HAD SOME MISTAKES.
THAT IS
 MY COAT IS LEFT AND CAME. SO, IT IS ON THE BATHROOM RACK IN THE 2ND ROOM UPSTAIRS.IT'S JUST MAY REMEMBER.
OTHERWISE
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,OTHERWISE
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 IT SHOULD BE ON THE DRESSING ROOM CUPBOARD. I GUESS
THIS
 IS THE CORRECT PLACE.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, IT IS VERY IMPORTANT FOR ME. BECAUSE OF REASON, MY ALL OF
MIGRATE
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MIGRATED
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 LEGAL DOCUMENTS ARE IN THERE. AND IT IS BLACK IN COLOR AND HAS 2 POCKETS ON THE BACKSIDE. ONE GOLD COLOR CHAIN WITH
BUCKLE
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A BUCKLE
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 ON THE RIGHT SHOULDER. SO , I BELIEVE YOU CAN FIND IT EASILY. THERE FOR, IF YOU CAN FIND IT PLEASE LET ME IMMEDIATELY.I WILL MEET
AT
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YOU AT
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 YOUR HOME. I SHOULD FIND IT AS SOON AS BECAUSE OF MY MIGRATION. AND
ALSO
 I AM AFFILIATED WITH
THIS
 SITUATION. SO I HOPE YOUR REQUEST IMMEDIATELY.THANK YOU YOUR FRIEND GAYATHRI
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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