"Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay"

It is claimed by some that learning by themselves is better whilst others reckon that having a teacher is always

prefferable

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preferable

. In my opinion, learning alone is an efficient way of excellent understanding and provides long-term memorizing

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rather than working with

teacher

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. In

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recent times, via cutting-edge technologies self-study became

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popular and now, have a great impact on

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people who want to learn something in detail

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diving into the information. Grasping some material,

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, in studying with self-education

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took

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a while,

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creates a chance to investigate deeply, highlight everything clearly and

then

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a considerable outcome.

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control in order to learn any topics after some time. In terms of grasping something alone, one of the best ways is writing and

this

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skill of teaching.

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, in the learning process, writing key points makes it fast,

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in teaching, written points are provided by the mentor in order to

sharing

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effectively and

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comfortable

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noting procedure to the audience. To sum up, some reckon that a better approach is to learn by themselves while having a mentor is considered

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a desirable option. I strongly prefer to do self-study

everytime

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and its benefits make positive contributions to not only my personal life

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but

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educational

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