In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private cars owners heavily and use their money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

One of the most important problems facing developing and developed countries is
traffic
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a traffic
the traffic
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jam
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jams
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.
Governments
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The governments
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of these
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countries
countires
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countries
are required to solve
this
problem. Most of the countries are going toward making
people
who are owing private
cares
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care
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to
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apply
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pay tax for the road they are using and for car
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parking
parkings
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parking
. There are many advantages of
above
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the above
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solution.
First
, The government can use the money to build more roads and highways which will reduce the traffic in the
country
.
Second
,
People
will tend to buy
less
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fewer
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private
cars
that
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which
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will reduce air pollution and will decrease traffic problems.
Third
, having public transportation will provide new jobs for the
people
in the
country
. Forth, prices of public transportation
is
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are
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significantly cheaper
then
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than
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private
cars
and will cost less to the community and it is feasible for everyone.
Last
but the least, improvement in public transportation will
improved
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torrism
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tourism
in the
country
as it is easy to access.
On the other hand
, from
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business
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a buiness
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buiness
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business
point of view, the
country
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country's
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income from
cars
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car
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companies will trend down as
people
will buy
less
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fewer
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cars
. The community
people
has
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have
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stick
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stuck
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to the timings of public transportations in order to reach their
distenations
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destinations
destination
. In summary, paying tax by private car owners should be studied in all aspects before taking the decision as it affects everyone in the
country
. In my personal point of view, the private car owners should pay taxes but not heavily as
this
will more advantages
then
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disadvantages.
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