In the past , when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantah5 and disadvantages of this development?

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is currently the ultimate goal of many
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marks as governments tend to send grade A
students
abroad to continue their studies. In
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, we will
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to discuss
advantages
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the advantages
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and disadvantages of studying abroad. Studying abroad directly
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the
students
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way. They passively learn
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to be independent in their life. The
students
have to cope with the new environment they are in. They need to take care of
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themselves
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them selves
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themselves
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.
For example
,
students
in their countries tend to depend on their families for washing
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and
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their apartments but when they are abroad, they have to do
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them selves
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.
In addition
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,
students
will have to be
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in dependent
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independent
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,
students
get
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opportunity
oportunity
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the oportunity
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to learn the language of the country they are studying in.
For instance
, when Omani
students
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in
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the United
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Kingdom, They learn to speak English fluently.
On the other hand
, travelling and studying abroad is quite costly
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the government and the person.
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,
government
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the government
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has to pay studying fees, accommodation fees and travel
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fees for each student.
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personal
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a personal
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aspect, being away from home country for
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a longtime
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longtime
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will create
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a feeling
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of
home sickness
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.
This
will negatively
affects
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the
students
. To point out,
students
who
is
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missing their family,
they
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feel sad,
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and lethargic
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and they feel
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interest
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in studying and living abroad. Generally speaking, studying abroad affects
the
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students
in bidirectional ways.
Students
must understand and learn about the culture of the countries they are studying in.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • Finally
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  • In general

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