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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Over a decade, there is a heated debate going on that Taking complete
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 is too expensive due to
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 huge fees.
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 has started shattering the dreams of numerous
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 studying.In
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 essay, I will shed light on whether
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 should be free to everyone or should take fees from
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 , regardless of income. I opine that
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 should be non-chargeable.
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 has always played a crucial part in the development of human beings so that they can learn skills and build their career. Across the globe in all countries,Affording good
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 has become a nutcracker job for parents due to hefty fee structure.Due to
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 , Many
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 didn’t get admission to prestige colleges and they stop studying.
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 results in unemployment as people don’t have skills.
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, These situations
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suicide rates and other crime.
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 suppose to take a loan at huge interest rates to complete their
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 and it takes a decade to repay the loan which puts
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 under mental pressure.
 In a few countries like Canada and Australia, the
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 fee is very minimal or nil.
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 results in more literacy rate in the nation which helps to hike the economic rate of the
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. According to a survey conducted by Harvard,The
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 offering free
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 produces more entrepreneurs and make Student self-sufficient to earn good money. A
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 like Canada has come into the developed nation list from the developing nation list which is a big achievement. To conclude, Universities should make
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 free for everyone and To combat
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 , Government should take the necessary steps to resolve
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 issue which will definitely increase the literacy rate,
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 skilled talent of the
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 and generate more employment.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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