You have just returned home after living with a family in an English-speaking country for six months. You now realise that you left a small bag of personal possessions in your room. Write to the family describing the things you left behind. Ask them to send some or all of them to you. Offer to cover the costs.

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Dear Sonia, Hope you are doing great. It was a great experience to live altogether. As you know that I was so excited on that day when I had a flight to come back home and at the same time I left my small Michael Kors backpack in my room. It has so much valuable paperwork and items.

First

and the foremost thing is that it has my all documents related to my education and work experience. Other than that there should be a Pen engraved with my name, which was presented by my grandparents on my eighteenth birthday.

In addition

to ,that it has a small bag inside with one thousand US dollars.

However

, it would be really great if you will courier my bag via the shipping company. I will reimburse all the charges including your fuel cost.

Furthermore

, please share your bank details with the receipt of courier charges and fuel costs for your car. I will send back the money as soon as possible. Hopefully, I will get my bag in the

few days and be able to proceed with my job. Yours faithfully, Alia

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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