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Government should focus thier spending in public service rather than on arts such as music and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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The given flow chart illustrates the process of how
plastic
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 containers are recycled. Overall, the process can be divided into three main stages, disposal, crushing and product manufacturing
stage
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, it can be seen that waste
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bottles
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 undergo a series of processes and are eventually turned into other products. Looking
first
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 at the disposal and crushing
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,
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first
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 the waste
bottles
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 are collected in the recycle box
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 they are transported to the recycling
center
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 by trucks, where they are resorted and checked manually. Following
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, the qualified
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 are
then
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 compressed into blocks and crushed into small pieces.
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,
those debris
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are
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 washed and produced into pellets before entering the
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stage
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. Moving onto the product manufacturing
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, after being shattered, the
plastic
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 pellets are heated in order to be transformed into raw material.
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, these materials are applied to produce an array of
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 products, from containers to clothes, completing the
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 process of
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bottles
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.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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