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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#money #businesses #responsibilities
There is the possibility of viewing the web of companies as a multitude of
money gaining
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 apparatus,
however
, according to some, firms have
also
 a duty to benefit the public in some manner. There is reasonable argumentation for both perspectives. Those who believe in
commitment
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 of enterprises
for
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 the wider community think that it is vital for the welfare of
the
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society.
This
 way various issues concerning
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society become coped with to some extent. Businesses get forced to tackle problems like climate change or
unemployment
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 of those with disabilities.
For example
, in Lithuania supermarkets like “Rimi” try to employ humans from
this
 group and sell more eco-friendly products in order to reach their social responsibility goals.
On the contrary
, without an imperative to positively impact
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society
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 some corporations might harm it.
For instance
, “Coca-Cola” could be a company that just offers beverages, which contain high amounts of sugar and cause health problems like obesity
as a result
, and gain profit out of that.
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fulfilling
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 duties for the public might hinder the economical flourishing of enterprises whose main focus differs from its expected actions.
Although
 it can be seen as negative that some corporations only focus on improving their economy,
this
 can increase the total welfare of the country, according to some philosophies. Economists argue that economical growth, which correlates with high figures of thriving firms, causes
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social welfare to rise.
Additionally
, a diversification of
specialization
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 of companies might be sufficient. In most
lands
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 there are
a lots
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 of social businesses, which could be funded more to accomplish desired results. In conclusion, seeking
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social responsibility of firms could turn out to be positive for the people from one perspective, but economical principles should be taken into account. Maybe most enterprises should strive for achieving completion of some adequate amount duties for the public, but social businesses should act as the leader in
this
 sphere.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social responsibilities
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Ethical behavior
  • Societal impact
  • Stakeholders
  • Profit-driven
  • Public perception
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Community development
  • Human rights
  • Workplace safety
  • Altruism
  • Balanced approach
  • Accountability
  • Consumer loyalty
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