As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is the possibility of viewing the web of companies as a multitude of
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apparatus,
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, according to some, firms have
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a duty to benefit the public in some manner. There is reasonable argumentation for both perspectives. Those who believe in
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of enterprises
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the wider community think that it is vital for the welfare of
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society.
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way various issues concerning
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society become coped with to some extent. Businesses get forced to tackle problems like climate change or
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of those with disabilities.
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, in Lithuania supermarkets like “Rimi” try to employ humans from
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group and sell more eco-friendly products in order to reach their social responsibility goals.
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, without an imperative to positively impact
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some corporations might harm it.
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, “Coca-Cola” could be a company that just offers beverages, which contain high amounts of sugar and cause health problems like obesity
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, and gain profit out of that.
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, the pressure
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duties for the public might hinder the economical flourishing of enterprises whose main focus differs from its expected actions.
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it can be seen as negative that some corporations only focus on improving their economy,
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can increase the total welfare of the country, according to some philosophies. Economists argue that economical growth, which correlates with high figures of thriving firms, causes
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social welfare to rise.
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, a diversification of
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of companies might be sufficient. In most
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there are
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of social businesses, which could be funded more to accomplish desired results. In conclusion, seeking
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social responsibility of firms could turn out to be positive for the people from one perspective, but economical principles should be taken into account. Maybe most enterprises should strive for achieving completion of some adequate amount duties for the public, but social businesses should act as the leader in
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sphere.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social responsibilities
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Ethical behavior
  • Societal impact
  • Stakeholders
  • Profit-driven
  • Public perception
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Community development
  • Human rights
  • Workplace safety
  • Altruism
  • Balanced approach
  • Accountability
  • Consumer loyalty
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