Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child's development. However, others argue that other things like television or friends have the most siginificant influence. Discuss both views and opine.
While many opine that
friends
or television have a role to play in the development
of a juvenile, I entirely opposed this
notion, and in my opinion, parents
are the ones who can nurture their kids better. In this
essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and at the end, I will discuss my opinion.
First
of all, parents
nurture their children with emotions, and they teach them about ethics and norms. To illustrate, they do everything for them with full of their responsibilities and understand each and everything about them because they know their children since their child's birth. For example
, in India, a recent survey found that 89% of parents
have a role to play in a youngster's development
.
On the other hand
, we can not deny the fact that TV or friends
also
play a part in an offspring's progress. As whichever thing they watch on television, intentionally or unintentionally, can impact their minds, and try to link those such
things in their real life. And this
thing is also
the same for their friends
. For instance
, the majority of children act the same as their friends
and sometimes behave similarly
to TV characters whether it would be positive or negative. Hence
, most of the things that they get from these two are negative, as they are in their development
age, and whatever thing they see, they observe.
In conclusion, although
friends
and TV has a role to play in a child's development
, parents
are the only one who can nurture their wards far better than above these two, as they know about their child since they are born.Submitted by Karamkv13 on
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