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Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Over recent years, students' labour somehow became a trend. Technology development pace these days leads to teenagers' access to many inputs
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 as knowledge about different skills. According to
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, many of them are willing to start learning something that can earn money from it. Some of them are trying to make their little online business. Another group of them participate in workshops or read online resources to achieve an additional skill-set.
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 is a satisfying reason for parents who are agreed with their children working. Because they feel good about hard and soft skills that their child learns during part-time work.
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, some children's rights activists always emphasize the importance of teenagers' free time. They believe that kids and teenagers should use their after-school time to play, learn and have fun and each activity that causes to make money from them is a kind of child abuse.
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 thought is actively trying to protect the health and peace of childhood According to my own opinion, moderation is the main standard to decide about every issue.I have the same idea regarding
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 discussion . As I think, we should respect our children's adolescence and remember that these ages are the golden period of their life to learn, grow and be happy and free. I do not actually agree with having a job at these ages, and in my opinion, we can make our kids disciplined, responsible and more strong with some hobbies, games or learning lessons that are not against their freedom and happiness; No need to encourage them to work.
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