Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a controversy amongst individuals about environmental

issues

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nowadays where one party said it is

as

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a result of

absence

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the absence

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of a

kind

of

plants

and

animals

while

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party insists there are more important

issues

other than those ones. In my opinion, I believe there should be more pressing ecological

problems

other than the

absent

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of

plants

and

animals

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species

. The

first

group argues that our environmental

problems

are due to a

kind

of

plants

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plant

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and

animals

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species

that are no longer available in our surroundings. They believe those

species

were protecting our surroundings by providing

shelters

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and oxygen for human consumption through photosynthesis and taking up CO2 in our environment. Those

animals

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species

feed on parasites that infest crops thereby reducing poor crop yields

leading

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to more oxygen in our surroundings. But

issues

arises

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in our environment when these

species

are less in number or totally absent. The

second

group argued that there are more to the ecological

issues

we face other than the absence of one

kind

of

plants

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plant

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and

animals

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species

.

This

might be

as a result

of our habits of littering the environment with

dirts

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specks of dirt

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which can cause land and water pollutions

hence

there will be lack of good water supply. Another issue might be overpopulation and

this

is one of the major

cause

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of our environmental

problems

. When there are too many people in a community, there will be competition for food and Oxygen and

this

causes illnesses like malnutrition in children and plenty

CO2

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in the air. To sum up, with the controversy about our environmental

problems

, it is evident that there

are

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more to the

issues

other than the absence of a

kind

of

plants

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plant

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and

animals

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animal

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species

.