In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of the driverless vehicles outweighs the disadvantages.

Eventually, all
vehicles
are going to be
driverless
with only
passengers
as occupants of these
vehicles
. There are so many benefits of these
electronic
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electronically
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driven motors which in my opinion
outweighs
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it's
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disadvantages. The main advantage of having only
electronic driven
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vehicles
on the
road
is the orderliness it creates on the
road
amongst the transport system.
This
is because these
driverless
vehicles
has
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been programmed in
such
a way as to obey traffic signals and drive at a particular speed
thus
making the
road
organized.
Secondly
, eradicating
vehicles
driven by a driver helps combat unnecessary
accidents
on the
road
and clears the
road
free from bad traffic.
This
is Because
,
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most of the
accidents
seen on the
road
are due to
carelessness
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of some drivers.
For example
, when a drunk driver is on the
road
, he either picks
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a quarrel
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quarrel
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with his
passengers
and has less concentration on the
road
or he drives with reckless abandonment
awhile
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on alcohol influence
thus
causing chaos and
accidents
on the
road
thereby leading to heavy traffic on the
road
.
Conversely
,
driverless
vehicles
can cause fear amongst
the
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passengers
. When these motors malfunction, and because there
are
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no
driver
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drivers
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on
seat
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the seat
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to reassure
passengers
, they tend to panic in fear and those with heart issues can pass out from it and it can even stop their journey halfway.
hence
, why some people will still prefer
normal driven
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vehicles
and not
the
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driverless
ones
.
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To sum up,
although
driverless
vehicles
can cause
damages
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to the
passengers
, it is the best mode of transport to adopt so as to
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create
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creat
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create
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orderliness on the
road
and prevent unnecessary
accidents
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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