In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of the driverless vehicles outweighs the disadvantages.

Eventually, all

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are going to be

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with only

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as occupants of these

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. There are so many benefits of these

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driven motors which in my opinion

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disadvantages. The main advantage of having only

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on the

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is the orderliness it creates on the

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amongst the transport system.

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is because these

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has

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been programmed in

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a way as to obey traffic signals and drive at a particular speed

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making the

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organized.

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, eradicating

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driven by a driver helps combat unnecessary

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on the

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and clears the

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free from bad traffic.

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is Because

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most of the

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seen on the

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are due to

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the carelessness

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of some drivers.

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, when a drunk driver is on the

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, he either picks

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a quarrel

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with his

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and has less concentration on the

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or he drives with reckless abandonment

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on alcohol influence

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causing chaos and

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on the

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thereby leading to heavy traffic on the

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.

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,

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can cause fear amongst

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passengers

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. When these motors malfunction, and because there

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no

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on

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to reassure

passengers

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, they tend to panic in fear and those with heart issues can pass out from it and it can even stop their journey halfway.

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, why some people will still prefer

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vehicles

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and not

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ones

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To sum up,

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can cause

damages

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to the

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, it is the best mode of transport to adopt so as to

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create

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orderliness on the

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and prevent unnecessary

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.