Technology has made workers able to work at home. This brings lots of benefits yo workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The more the use of technological

communication

systems increases,the more people who are used to working from their

home

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get more

benefit

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benefits

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from these systems.

Therefore

the number of homeworking has increased dramatically through the years.

Moreover

, the homeworking system can provide flexibility and better

communication

with family.

Thus

,these are the key point for advantages of working from

home

Firstly

, people who

work

from their

home

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can enjoy their

work

with flexibility.As there will be no stress from their boss and have the chance to choose the working hours , places to

work

peacefully and food .

For instance

, if the

worker

cannot get up early in the morning due to the heavy

work

at night ,they do not have to worry

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their breakfast and about being late for office

time

. And

then

,the

worker

does not have a problem with the place to

work

in their house.In the office, they cannot choose their place whatever they want.

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,

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worker

can take a rest peacefully if they

work

from their

home

.

Consequently

, They can manage their

time

with their best schedule without worrying about anything. For the

second

point, homeworking can increase

communication

with family members.Since

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the

worker

no longer has to go to their office and

have

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more than enough

time

for their family.

For example

,

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worker

who

have

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children at

home

are able to spend their free

times

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with their children and they can give the best attention to them. The

worker

has

time

to send and call back their children from their school.

As a result

, their family and their relationship

is

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getting better and better. To sum up,

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flexibility and better

communication

with their family are some of the benefits for the workers who have a chance to

work

from their

home

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.Due to these advantages ,people are more likely to

work

from their

home

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.