In many countries woman no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not repent the financial security that marriage country. To what extent do you agree?
Today
, we are seeing woman
everywhere whether as Fix the agreement mistake
women
fashion
Add an article
a fashion
model
or CEO of the company. They are able to perform Fix the agreement mistake
models
same
duties as like Correct article usage
the same
mans
. Some people think that Correct your spelling
men
this
job or business behavior
of Change the spelling
behaviour
woman
have caused a decrease in woman
getting married as they no longer feel Add an article
a woman
the woman
this
need for financial security. I partially agrees
with the statement. Both viewpoints will be elucidated in the subsequent paragraphs.
On the one hand, They don'Change the verb form
agree
t
like getting married because they don't
want to share their life
with someone else. To illustrate, One of the reasons for increase
in divorce cases is that they don'Add an article
the increase
an increase
t
like sharing their life
with another person. They want to live their own life
, in their own personal space. In addition
to this
, they want to spend their life
with parents
as they don'Correct pronoun usage
their parents
t
have any other person who can take care of them. For example
, Man
Correct your spelling
Mango
go
to Change the verb form
goes
office
to earn money for their Add an article
the office
family
like Change the noun form
families
father
and mother. They Correct pronoun usage
their father
also
want to do the same for their parents as there will no
one after her to take care Add a missing verb
be no
for
them.
Change preposition
of
On the other hand
, Many woman
Change to a plural noun
women
are
helping their husbands after getting married to establish their business Change the verb form
is
today
. To elucidate, My friends
wife help him set up his Change to a genitive case
friend's
friends'
shoes
business Change the noun form
shoe
today
by working in retail
store. Now, They both work Add an article
a retail
the retail
simantaneously
and earn their living. Correct your spelling
simultaneously
Moreover
, there has been Add an article
an increase
increase
in Change the verb form
increasing
increased
couple
where Add an article
a couple
woman
works in Add an article
the woman
a woman
office
and earn living while Add an article
an office
the office
man
stays at home and perform household duties. Add an article
the man
For instance
, According to the survey performed last
year, there were more than ten percent
of couples where Change the spelling
per cent
woman
was earning living and Add an article
a woman
the woman
man
Correct article usage
the man
were
managing Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Correct article usage
the household
household
.
In Conclusion, Change the noun form
households
Woman
have become so independent Fix the agreement mistake
women
today
that they are earning for their husbands and families.Submitted by arjannarula on
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