You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people to celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night. Write a letter to the Chairman of the Housing Society. In your letter: Explain what will be happening Offer your apologies in advance Invite him to join the celebration

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Dear Sir, My name is Shikha, and I am a resident of your society named Acme Heights 2. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I have organized a small get-together in my garden on coming Sunday with my friends on the occasion of completing our graduation. The party will start at 7PM in the evening and will go on till late at night, not sure about the timing. There will be some music, along with that I have planned some games for everyone to keep the party energetic. So, there will be some noise, I hope you'll inform all the nearby residents of my house so that they do not get annoyed.

Moreover

, one of my friends is getting engaged in the

month so, I have planned a small surprise for him, for a short period of time we'll burn out some crackers to surprise him. I would really like to feel sorry in advance for all of

this

noise and disturbance which will be caused to all the nearby residents. I would really need support from everyone.

Also

, I like you to join our party, I am sure you'll have fun. Looking forward to your positive reply. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

Submitted by shikha_dhingra on Sat Oct 01 2022

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