Nuclear power is used for many purposes. There are advantages and disadvantages to having nucleear power. What do you feel they are and do you believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Why or why not?

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in the world dive into two parts. One side
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nuclear
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for
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because they believe that nuclear
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is a good solution and choose for producing
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.
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side
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support
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clean
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means
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prefer clean
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like solar
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or wind
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because they believe that
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nuclear
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can produce much more
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than other clean
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but
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power
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chemical process is too dangerous for
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and people
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and animals. Let me explain how can humanity produce
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nuclear. Just some
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materials
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have
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ability
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nuclear
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. Everybody knows that atoms make up of protons and neutrons and nuclear
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released from the nucleus. Basically, uranium 232 is a well-known
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for producing nuclear
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. if you move a neutron that has a specific and certain speed known as thermal neutrons, toward to core of an
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like uranium 232, you can make up nuclear
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. Because the core of
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split
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of
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situation
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is released during the splitting of the atomic nucleus. A nuclear
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atom
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like uranium 232 is really hard to find, and
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, the chemical and physical process is so complex that no one can produce nuclear
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on their own. When thinking
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warming, drought, melting
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and extinction of some species,
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have to take precautions for decreasing the global warming effect and green gas emissions. So, nuclear
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is a good option for humanity and our world. Some
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renewable
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energy
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can help
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impact
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of global warming but renewable
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technologies are still developing.
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, semiconductor structures of solar
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are still developing by scientists and every year semiconductor structures of solar panel change, because
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rate of the solar
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panels is less. Making
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solar panels, need a wide area. Especially
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in Turkey convert the
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area
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a solar
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area.
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can’t recycle. Even if the nuclear
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process is complex, important and unforgiving, physics laws don't any
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. So,
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can rely on science to use their
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needs, at least until renewable
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technology sources develop. and they can help reduce greenhouse gas emissions during
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time.
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need more electricity day by day. Because we use technological devices
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everywhere
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in hospital
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hospital
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hospitals
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, factories, cities, entertainment venues and lighting. Electronic devices are
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important part of humanity. Giving up any electronic device is not easy for anybody.
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, when we consider the increasing
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need, we turn to alternative
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sources
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as nuclear.
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nuclear
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plants have devastating consequences, we can build safer nuclear
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plants by learning from bad accidents in the past with helping of the laws of physics,
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