These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past . Do the advantages of this development outweighs the disadvantages ?

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”travelling the world” that has become easier in recent years.personally speaking , I believe that

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there are some drawbacks

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this

phenomenon , the benefits are more worthy to be highlighted . My

first

and most important point is that the ability

of travelling

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the world will allow their interaction experiences to be globalised . Part of the travelling leisure is to learn about the country’s traditions by

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with locals .

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, that could be an opportunity not only to be

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but

also

to make friends from all over the world .

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, supposing I had not

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to the UK I will not be having any foreign friends . My

second

point is that people will keep discovering new

cultures

and enjoy learning history as long as

they

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able to travel.

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, even though I find learning about new

cultures

fascinating ,I used to hate traditional methods

such

as reading articles with the aim of learning about that

cultures

.

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when I

traveled

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the

first

time to Spain I found that the most enjoyable way to enrich myself with

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cultures

is by travelling to the country itself. To sum up , I believe that unless we have the ability to travel the world, our interaction experience will not be globalised and we might be limited from learning about other

cultures

and traditions in an enjoyable method .