Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is being said by some dwellers that significant environmental problems of these days are losing of particular kinds of living kinds,

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believed that there are more important problems about the

environment

I personally argue that the most important problem has to be something other than loss of

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individuals

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issue

that is

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by more and more animals are getting

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extinct

or getting their lives

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deforestation

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variety

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animals going

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the food pyramid of whole

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as they are empty of

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and even more importantly there are some who

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problems that are even worst .that the society doesn’t know about and their

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my idea that there are other thorny issues around

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rather than just loss of

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specific

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species

spices

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species

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vegetation

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both views got discussed and explained in the essay.

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
extinction
habitat loss
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food chain
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pollution
personal actions
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