Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices would help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

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ticket prices should reduce and the directorate of Sri Lanka should invest in the public

transport

system. Both of these reasons will help to rapidly reduce

transport

pollution. even though, there are some supporters for

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segment. I firmly criticize for several reasons and

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essay will

exploreing

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with a summary. On one side of the essay,

government

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the government

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should invest

for

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the public

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system. Because

,

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are

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98 present of

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using public

bus

or train for their daily schedule.

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normal

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bus

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in Sri Lanka. The

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main roads there will

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second

place to busses facility. There are disabled. So,

that

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idea given above is right. But, It is like a mafia .

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those

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days

Ministry

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of

country

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invested lots of money

for

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developing

transport

and roads. But , project intermmidiatiers destroyed our hopes. They all are

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a thief

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thief

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. So, from my

perspective

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should correct our people's

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.

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we should

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develop

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our country.

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highly

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in

public

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travelling system.

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government should think about , What kind of

peoples

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are using

in

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public

transport

. So, These people if there

ware

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lots of money they never used in

bus

or train for their needs. Because of

this

reason, Highly tickets price is

a

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unreasonable thing

to

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oppressed people.

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hand

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peoples have

a responsibilities

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about

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this

property . We should protect them. In conclusion, my view

of

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point ,

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thing is we should change our

mind

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with good habits and our leaders should

developed

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their attitude . They should think about

peoples

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. Because of

this

reason, I

cant

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agree directly with

this

opinion.