Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

1. A building

that is

historically important 2. A structure that spans a river 3. A place where animals are kept 4. A vehicle

that is

used for transportation (on land) 5. A place with rides, shows, and other entertainment 6. A person who tells you about the importance of historic buildings, etc 7. A reduction in the price of a ticket 8. A voyage (usually as a holiday/vacation) on a ship 9. A place where one can see art 10. A solid structure that was usually fortified against an attack

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

10 paragraphs

91 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

diligence
consistent effort
inherent talent
honing skills
external factors
upbringing
social connections
economic background
right place at the right time
contributing factor
conjunction
success
achievements
endeavors
fortune
serendipity
determinants
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Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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