Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Brief introductions of
Binh
Dinh
, Nha Trang and
Phu
Yen
. Match the activity with the correct description.
Binh
Dinh
province
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Binh
Dinh
is a
province
situated in the South Central Coast region
in
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Vietnam
. Like other beautiful provinces in
this
region,
Binh
Dinh
is well-known for its natural beauty with beaches, isles, capes, etc. Top 3
atractions
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attractions
you must visit in
Binh
Dinh
province
. Ky Co is a beautiful
beach
which was located in the heart of the
Binh
Dinh
province
in
Vietnam
. The
beach
is very famous for its white
sands
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and
with
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its
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a
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beautiful atmosphere.
This
beach
is suitable for several water sports
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also
. Quang Trung
museum
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Museum
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:
This
is a museum dedicated to the National hero Quang Trung.
This
is a historic landmark attracting both Vietnamese and foreign researchers and tourists which was inaugurated in 1978. t is one of the largest museums dedicated to famous Vietnamese personalities. It is
also
one of the busiest attracting researchers and tourists. Thị Nại Port is the second largest port in Bình Định
Province
,
Vietnam
. It is located in Hai Cang ward at the eastern tip of Quy Nhơn city. In 2009, 644 tons of goods were handled in Thị Nại Port, of which 113 tons were exported and 3 tons
imported
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. Nha Trang Attractions Nha Trang is
Vietnam
’s most popular seaside resort town located along the second most beautiful bays in the country. It features beautiful beaches with fine and clean sand and clear ocean water with mild temperatures. The city has about 300,000 inhabitants and is more lively and urban in character than other
beach
destinations like Mui Ne and
Phu
Quoc. It’s
also
a major scuba diving centre
of
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in
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Vietnam
.
Phu
Yen
Phu
Yen
is another
off beat
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track destination in Central
of
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Vietnam
with pristine beaches, busy fisherman villages, glistening mini desserts, mouth-watering seafood and astounding natural landscapes. If you’re planning to travel to
Phu
Yen
for a peaceful holiday, you certainly won’t be disappointed.
While
attractions in
Phu
Yen
are a bit similar to those in Quy Nhon,
Phu
Yen
is a lesser-known destination which has only become (a bit) more popular thanks to the Vietnamese film “I see yellow flowers on the green grass”.
Nonetheless
, many people still call
this
land a sleeping beauty, waiting for the Charming Prince to come and wake her up.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • diligence
  • consistent effort
  • inherent talent
  • honing skills
  • external factors
  • upbringing
  • social connections
  • economic background
  • right place at the right time
  • contributing factor
  • conjunction
  • success
  • achievements
  • endeavors
  • fortune
  • serendipity
  • determinants
  • efficacy
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