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Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#someone #luck
Reading 1.Pre-reading a) When and where did you spend your
last
 holiday? What did you do during your vacation? Which places did you visit? b) Where did you get
information
 about that trip? (From your family? Your relatives? Your friends? Your colleagues? Social Media? Internet?
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 etc.) c) Do you feel satisfied with the
information
 you have got? Why? or Why not? 2. Reading TOURIST
INFORMATION
 OFFICES The
tourism
 department operates
tourism
information
 offices in many origin countries. A
tourism
information
office
 promotes
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 or builds, travel to a destination country through advertising and special promotional activities.
For example
, representatives of the
information
office
 give brochures about vacations, the destination country, and special tours to travel agents in the origin country. A brochure is a printed folder, or pamphlet, about a place, product, or company. Brochures advertising
tourism
 are written, printed, and supplied to
information
 offices in origin countries by the
tourism
 department.
Mr.
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 Carter is the director (manager) of a
tourism
information
office
. He has a large staff.
A staff
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 in a business
office
 is a group of
people
 who
work
 together. The staff includes
people
 who
work
 directly with travel agents; others who do
work
 with companies and businesses;
people
 who contact newspapers and television and radio stations; some who
work
 with airlines and hotels;
people
 who write advertising; and
information
 clerks and secretaries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diligence
  • consistent effort
  • inherent talent
  • honing skills
  • external factors
  • upbringing
  • social connections
  • economic background
  • right place at the right time
  • contributing factor
  • conjunction
  • success
  • achievements
  • endeavors
  • fortune
  • serendipity
  • determinants
  • efficacy
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