You have bought a new home recently and you want to hire an interior decorator. Write a letter to the interior decorator seeking information about his services. In your letter • let him know how you came to know about his work/name • specify about your condominium {flat) • discuss your furnishing taste

#home #decorator #information #services #work #name #condominium #{flat #taste

Mr Jhon, I am writing

this

letter in order to obtain some sort of knowledge about the interior decorations for my new

house

as I want to make some updates.

Last

week, I was at my friend's home for a dinner party because he bought a new flat. After finishing the meal, he introduced his

house

. While having a tour of his

house

, I got really amazed after seeing the interior and exterior of the

house

as it was decorated really well. When I asked him about the person who decorated it, he mentioned your name. I moved to a

house

and it has three bedrooms with attached washrooms. The leaving room is quite spacious, in which I want to install roof sealing with different colours.

Further

, for the kitchen, I want some hanging lights, which I would prefer to be in dark colours. I bought a new TV as well, as I already have a big frame for it, but I want to renovate it. At

last

, I have chosen some paints, so I would really appreciate your assistance. I look forward to hearing from you, Yours sincerely,

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thirdly
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for example
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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

189 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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