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The maps depicts the information about modificationsin a town called willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

The maps depicts the information about modificationsin a town called willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
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The maps
depicts
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the
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apply
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information about
modificationsin
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modifications in
modifications
 a town called
willington
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Willington
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 in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
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, in the early
time
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 it was more likely
a
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an
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agriculture
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 area which is converted into
residential
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 area in 2000. In 1780, in the middle of the town there were four farms and
river
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a river
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 on
west
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side
 but in 1860 farms were reduced twice in number and
addon
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an addon
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 of
bridge
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the bridge
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 to cross the
river
. In
early
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year
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, on the
north east
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northeast
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side
 of the
area
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,area
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 there was a
village
 of 100 homes which doubled in
later
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a later
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year
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. In 1780,
south east
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side
 part was full of woods which reduced over time. In 2000, numerous changes happened
starting
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 with
number
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a number
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 of shops
opened
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along with
river
 and
new
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a new
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 road on
north
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the north
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side
 which is connected to
village
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the village
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.On the
south west
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southwest
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 end of the
river
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,river
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 there was an addon of wetland for birds.On the opposite of
it
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 new
ficilites
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facilities
 like schools and sports field were built which is connected to
village
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the village
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 by a road.In 2000, there was
massive
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 change in
village
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the village
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 where 500 homes were built for residents.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words river, side, village with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "depicts" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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