Today, people are buying more consumer goods lik ejwelry and household appliances. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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are buying many things,

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, if it is necessary there will not be a problem. Because

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have to arrange their

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.

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, sometimes we need

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devices at home.

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we are paying too much and purchasing new technological goods.

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, Buying these kinds of stuff could make

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happier for a certain time.

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look more attractive with jewellery, whereas

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of household appliances like microwaves, washing machines and vacuum cleaners.

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, my sister goes

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shopping

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as her way to release the stress level caused by her workload. Despite its advantages,

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growing trend would bring negative effects. Usually, the price of these product categories is expensive.

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would lose their saving fund if they spend too much on luxurious things.

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, my friend who really loves to collect expensive goods had financial difficulties when emergencies like accidents happen. To sum up, consumer goods product expenses could bring positive things to improve mood but

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habit brings some negative impacts on the financial health of an individual. The disadvantages were higher than the positive impacts. In my view, it is better to spend the money wisely.