Drug abuse is becoming more and more common in many countries. What are some of the problems associated with drug abuse, and what are some of the possible solutions?

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development
develope
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drug
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a drug
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that a lot of
people
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young society use it.
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, there are a number of
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for
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drug
abuse
. One of the most important
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with
drug
abuse
is mental diseases. The
first
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these drugs on our body is
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the brain
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that
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make
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some problems
such
as
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hallucination
hallucinations
, euphoria and
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aggressiveness
.
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problem
is being isolated. When they use much
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their personality is changed and they communicated with
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society
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society
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before
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before
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also
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far from
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world.
For example
, when a teenager
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from
drug
abuse
, he never
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gathering with his family he just wants to be alone.
On the other hand
, there are some solutions
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this
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.
First
,
government
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the government
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should fight
with
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people
that
drug
distribution.
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, they install some security
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in general
place
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for pretend
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problem
.
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, a number of
people
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unemployee
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unemployed
go to
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dope
so
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,
states
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with create jobs for
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the community
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can tackle
with
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drug
abuse
.
Third
,
family
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the family
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should pay attention to their children and family members and
also
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behaviour
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can keep their family members away from
this
matter.
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them
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to study
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everything
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every thing
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that they like or go to
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and
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exercise. In conclusion, government and family have
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more role
to
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solution
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