In some countries, owimg a home rather than renting one is very impoertant for people. What might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

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differ according to people’s
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in each country. Owing a
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of the priorities which are of relatively different importance in different countries. Countries with lower economic
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concentrate more on
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point. As the
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represents the
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shelter when the plan doesn’t work. People with income allowing them to buy a
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don’t hesitate to put all
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they have to owe a
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. People with lower income have no other choice than to rent
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buy
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they live with a dream of
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owing
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a
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. Owing a
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allows you to live with less load and to have more choice or at least the
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opportunity
opportionity
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opportunity
to make your choices in different situations. As there is no
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monthly deadline where you have to pay the rent or you will be in
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. You have the space to think about different things and about your future plans. Knowing that
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is your personal ownership allows you to arrange it according to your needs or add whatever you want. Whenever you change your mind you can sell your
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for a price
allows
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you to buy another
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in
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place. On the other side, Renting a
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may have some advantages. Mainly it will cost you less. You will have an easier
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opportunity
opportiounity
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opportunity
to change your location after the month ends. The risk of investing much money in a place where you don’t what can happen is zero. I know a friend who travelled to a new country and
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preferred
preffered
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preferred
to rent a
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than
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buy
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. Which allowed him to direct more money for other plans, But now he is really regretting
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that. He has to work more hours monthly. Owing a
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or renting
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is a reasonable discussion most individuals pass through during their life, and make their decisions according to their
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situations
situatuions
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situations
. With no
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yhat
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owinf
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owing
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is
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preffered
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preferred
choice by most people.
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