Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give the reason and relevant examples.
It is true that it has become more and more popular for some
people
to enjoy dangerous sports
. Although
it is argued that individuals have a right to have some funs with these kinds of sports
, it is my Correct your spelling
belief
belif
that dangerous Correct your spelling
belief
sports
should be banned.
On the one
hand, dangerous sports
such
as rock climbing, Correct your spelling
snowboarding
snow boarding
or ski jumping Correct your spelling
snowboarding
makes
experiences for Correct subject-verb agreement
make
people
that they have never experienced before. Due to refreshing
experience, they can not easily forget it and constantly continue to enjoy them. Correct article usage
the refreshing
Also
, there are athelets
who have evolved from simply enjoying themselves to professional.
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athletes
However
, on the other hand
, I think these kinds of extreme sports
have bad effects to
Change preposition
on
human
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humans
especially
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,especially
to
their health. In my own experience, I witnessed accidents Change preposition
on
in
several times. Change preposition
apply
One
of the cases was my cousin. He had loved Correct your spelling
snowboarding
snow boarding
almost all his life. Of course, he was very good at it and displayed great skills in that. Correct your spelling
snowboarding
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Unfortunately
Unfourtunately
, Correct your spelling
Unfortunately
one
day he had a mistake and rolled down the snowy hill. Both of his legs and an
arm Correct article usage
apply
was
broken. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
In addition
, Correct your spelling
because
beacuse
of unbearable pain, he had blacked out for several months. All family members spent a cruel time either. Correct your spelling
because
Although
he pulled through, he can not still live as active as he used to be.
I know there are many people
who enjoy dangerous sports
in a safe way. Nevertheless
, only one
mistake can threaten one
's life. Furthermore
, curiosity should not be controlled by oneself, so it has to be strongly regulated by laws. Still, there are patients and fatalities because of those sports
. In conclusion, it seems to me that governments have a more crucial role in protecting people
from dangerous sports
and to prohibit
it.Change the verb form
prohibiting
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