You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter. Correct the information in the article l Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information l Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sameer, I am a resident of Chandigarh and one of the frequent readers of your International magazine "Travel and Time". I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the

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that has been published in your magazine about Rock Garden and its history which is one of the most famous tourist places in our city. As I was reading through the

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, I noticed that the founder's name was written as Netaji Subhash Chandra

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of the actual founder i.e., "Nek Chand" Since your magazine is read by students and professionals worldwide and holds a good reputation in society, it is very important to publish correct information as

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, the readers would hesitate to rely on your content in the future.

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, I suggest that you should publish an updated

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in the coming week after correction and give a disclaimer about the incorrect printing at the bottom of the

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for the general public. You may revisit the history of the Rock garden once again to double-check the information. I hope you will consider my view and definitely update the true information in your upcoming publication. Yours faithfully, Sneha

cshivam2675Sun Oct 02 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

193 words

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