You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter. Correct the information in the article l Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information l Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sameer, I am a resident of Chandigarh and one of the frequent readers of your International magazine "Travel and Time". I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the
article
that has been published in your magazine about Rock Garden and its history which is one of the most famous tourist places in our city. As I was reading through the
article
, I noticed that the founder's name was written as Netaji Subhash Chandra
instead
of the actual founder i.e., "Nek Chand" Since your magazine is read by students and professionals worldwide and holds a good reputation in society, it is very important to publish correct information as
otherwise
, the readers would hesitate to rely on your content in the future.
Therefore
, I suggest that you should publish an updated
article
in the coming week after correction and give a disclaimer about the incorrect printing at the bottom of the
article
for the general public. You may revisit the history of the Rock garden once again to double-check the information. I hope you will consider my view and definitely update the true information in your upcoming publication. Yours faithfully, Sneha
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