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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norriton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norriton, and planned future development of the site.
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The two maps illustrate information about an industrial
area
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 in the town of Norbiton,
as well as
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, the planned development.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that
this
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area
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 in the future witness significant changes. There are much of housing in the town.
Moreover
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,
Factory
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the Factory
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 was replaced with housing and shops.
Furthermore
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, a school and playground were constructed. The industrial
area
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 was converted into a community. Planned future development was created for the community. There are many facilities
such
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 as shops, medical
centers
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centres
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, schools, and playgrounds. In the future, the main river was cut.
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, the road was built. The size of the
area
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 will increase.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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