Nowadays many people eat very badly in spite of the information which is available about ways to have a healthy, balanced diet. What could be the possible causes of this? Suggest some solutions which may improve the eating habits of the young.
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the reasons
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time
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that
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For
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food
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instead
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or fast
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tasks
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meeting
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diet
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sport
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sports
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This
is because the person will get less Linking Words
energy
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the
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a
dietary
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diet
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deliciously
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energy
for Use synonyms
sport
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energy
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activities
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Secondly
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time
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instead
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food
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the
lunch and Correct article usage
apply
the
dinner. Correct article usage
apply
However
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and unhealthy Use synonyms
diery
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diary
dietary
low income
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low-income
people
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food
. Use synonyms
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instance
, buying Use synonyms
sandwich
with Fix the agreement mistake
sandwiches
fires
and coke will cost much less Correct your spelling
fries
comparing
to the healthy cooked dishes in magnificent restaurants.So, low -costly Change the form of the verb
compared
food
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replace
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replaces
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low
price . Correct pronoun usage
its low
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even healthy Use synonyms
food
can be prepared Use synonyms
in
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on
economically
well budget.
Solutions for these issues can be organising Correct article usage
an economically
work
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pattern
and task achievements in the organised pattern so spending appropriate and less Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
energy
and following Use synonyms
to
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apply
the
healthy Correct article usage
a
diet
without any postpone and obstacles .Use synonyms
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instance
, taking needed breaks during Use synonyms
the
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apply
work
and accomplish cooking Use synonyms
of
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the
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to the
next
day will save Linking Words
time
and help to avoid spending much budget Use synonyms
for
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on
food
. Use synonyms
Moreover
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hard
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on hard
task
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tasks
first
or in the Linking Words
first
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half
halfe
of the day will keep a person Correct your spelling
half
to
need less Fix the infinitive
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energy
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other part
of the day, so Change the wording
another part
other parts
this
leads to completing their Linking Words
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tasks
easily and timely by having Use synonyms
not
harm Add the particle
tonot
diet
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well prepared
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well-prepared
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also
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tasks
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the
focusingCorrect article usage
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will alleviate their Use synonyms
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with
spending less Change preposition
by
energy
.
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Finally
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food
acceptance by the community is Use synonyms
common
problem for humankind. Being overwhelmed with a job load and having Add an article
a common
lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
time
for cooking along with high-priced healthy Use synonyms
food
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lead
to taking not healthy Change the verb form
leads
food
by individuals. Solutions Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
well- organised
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well-organised
work
and prioritising Use synonyms
work
or Use synonyms
tasks
level by difficulties will save Use synonyms
energy
for a healthy Use synonyms
diet
. If Use synonyms
the
society will follow Correct article usage
apply
to
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apply
well done
plan , Add a hyphen
well-done
the
healthy Correct article usage
a
diet
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people
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