Nowadays many people eat very badly in spite of the information which is available about ways to have a healthy, balanced diet. What could be the possible causes of this? Suggest some solutions which may improve the eating habits of the young.
Nowadays ,unhealthy
food
is the
common problem Correct article usage
a
for
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in
the
society Correct article usage
apply
this
is because fast food
is being
frequently taken by Unnecessary verb
apply
people
instead
of keeping healthy
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a healthy
diet
. Despite of
healthy Change preposition
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campaign
the world continuously eating not good Fix the agreement mistake
campaigns
food
. This
essay will discuss reasons
and solutions for unhealthy Correct article usage
the reasons
food
acceptance by persons
.
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people
Firstly
, individuals are hardworking ,so this
demands extreme energy
from people
to spend in
their everyday Change preposition
on
work
and even household activities
.In other words
, work
overload at jobs requires so much time
so
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that
people
even stay for more overtime work
, this
consequently
leads them need
more Add the particle
to need
energy
to stay awake and energetic. For
instance
,if one eats a
healthy Correct article usage
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food
such
as vegetables , boiled or baked food
instead
of bread, fast
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or fast
food
which have more calories he or she will be less active and indolent for completing his or her tasks
at the job and meeting
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meet
work
timeframe. In addition
to that , eating and following to healthy diet
will lead to reluctance for sport
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sports
activities
. This
is because the person will get less energy
from the
healthy Correct article usage
a
dietary
. Replace the word
diet
For
instance
, fast food
or food
which has high calories taste deliciously
and Replace the adverb
delicious
also
supply with a
high Remove the article
apply
energy
for sport
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sports
activities
.So, busy community
need unhealthy Fix the agreement mistake
communities
food
rather than low calory healthy dietary because of energy
demand for completeness of everyday work
activities
.
Secondly
, the population has lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
time
for cooking so instead
of it they prefer purchasing food
for the
lunch and Correct article usage
apply
the
dinner. Correct article usage
apply
However
, fast food
and unhealthy diery
are available for every middle and Correct your spelling
diary
dietary
low income
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low-income
people
than healthy food
. For
instance
, buying sandwich
with Fix the agreement mistake
sandwiches
fires
and coke will cost much less Correct your spelling
fries
comparing
to the healthy cooked dishes in magnificent restaurants.So, low -costly Change the form of the verb
compared
food
replace
high- costly healthy Change the verb form
replaces
food
because of low
price . Correct pronoun usage
its low
Additionally
, it saves time
even healthy food
can be prepared in
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on
economically
well budget.
Solutions for these issues can be organising Correct article usage
an economically
work
pattern
and task achievements in the organised pattern so spending appropriate and less Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
energy
and following to
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apply
the
healthy Correct article usage
a
diet
without any postpone and obstacles .For
instance
, taking needed breaks during the
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apply
work
and accomplish cooking of
healthy Change preposition
apply
food
earlier prior the
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to the
next
day will save time
and help to avoid spending much budget for
buying fast Change preposition
on
food
. Moreover
, competing hard
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on hard
task
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tasks
first
or in the first
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half
halfe
of the day will keep a person Correct your spelling
half
to
need less Fix the infinitive
apply
energy
for other part
of the day, so Change the wording
another part
other parts
this
leads to completing their work
tasks
easily and timely by having not
harm Add the particle
tonot
diet
.So, well prepared
Add a hyphen
well-prepared
work
schedule or scheme and also
right accomplishing tasks
by the
focusingCorrect article usage
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to
difficult Change preposition
on
tasks
will alleviate their work
accomplishment with
spending less Change preposition
by
energy
.
Finally
, unhealthy food
acceptance by the community is common
problem for humankind. Being overwhelmed with a job load and having Add an article
a common
lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
time
for cooking along with high-priced healthy food
lead
to taking not healthy Change the verb form
leads
food
by individuals. Solutions such
as well- organised
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well-organised
work
and prioritising work
or tasks
level by difficulties will save energy
for a healthy diet
. If the
society will follow Correct article usage
apply
to
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apply
well done
plan , Add a hyphen
well-done
the
healthy Correct article usage
a
diet
will not be a problem for people
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