n some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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of the world, buying a

house

instead

of renting one is very popular and vital for

people

.there are several factors which can explain

this

tendency. and in my opinion ,there are both advantages and

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backs to

this

choice .the upcoming paragraphs will

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illustrate

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illustrate

further

.

firstly

,it is way

economical

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to purchase a

house

then

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to rent one ,

although

buying a place can cost a lot

initially

,

on

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the long term it can

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of money .

moreover

, if the family

in

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need or going through tough times they can simply sell it .so

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like an investment .

secondly

, many

people

tend to have certain standards and

disgns

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designs

design

for their home .

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or

spacous

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spacious

gardens and

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could only be

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own crib.

Finally

,safety can play a role in

this

,

in other words

,

family

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families

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with kids will most

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likely

liklely

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prefer to raise

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their

thier

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their

kids in a

house

that they

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choose

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chose

and

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designed

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designed

. In my perspective ,the main

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benefit

benfit

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benefit

of

this

situation is the

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settlement

settlment

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settlement

and

quiteness

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quietness

that come from owning a

house

.because usually these homes are far from the loud crowdy life of the city.one can indeed enjoy his time with family and

neibghors

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neighbours

in peace .on the other side ,renting a

house

can allow

people

freedom of movement .

for instance

,

people

who constantly have to move their

work place

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can find renting a much practical choice . to conclude. owning a property is prefered by many

people

due to several reasons.and I

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believe

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that

this

choice comes with many advantages ,but

also

some restrictions