Some believe that traffic problems in cities can best be resolved by investing in urban infrastructure while others feel there are superior solutions. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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congestion is an increasing concern in urban areas. While some believe that funding infrastructure can improve the current situation others are of the

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that there are better alternatives to resolve growing concerns of over-jamming vehicles. In my

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, increased funding can only offer a temporary solution

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seeking other measures can better stabilise the situation. Supporters of investments firmly believe that renovation and reconstruction can improve over congestion of roads, thereby getting

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in control.

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, widening roads, building bridges, vertical home expansion, and sea-link pathways can improve overcrowding.

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, with the rise in population due to overcrowding of

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, migration of people from rural to urban areas and increased concentration of job opportunities in

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better infrastructure will not be able to withstand the problem.

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opinion

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, financing these projects will not improve the current situation.

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, the government must deep dive into the root cause of the problem and bring in policies and reforms to put an end to

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jams in developed areas.

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, one vehicle policy, providing employment opportunities to underdeveloped

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, rural development etc.

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measures will evenly distribute the population thereby minimising the concentration of vehicles in a particular area which in turn will reduce

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jams in

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. To conclude,

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funding infrastructure projects may seem an easier solution to deal with the plight of

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in the

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may not be the ultimate solution to the problem.

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adopting other forms

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as rural development, and vehicle policies may bring better hope to dealing with

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problems in

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban infrastructure
traffic congestion
bottlenecks
public transportation systems
cycling lanes
pedestrian pathways
telecommuting
smart traffic management
AI and IoT
carpooling
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vehicular traffic
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Some believe that traffic problems in cities can best be resolved by investing in urban infrastructure while others feel there are superior solutions. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many small, local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. How does this effect local communities? How could this situation be improved?

Some people think painting and drawings are important as other subjects. They should be compulsory in high school education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

107.Some say that music is a good way of bringing people from different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people' salaries to pay for public services such as roads and schools. Other thinks high taxes are bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.