Some people say that Government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is fact that every
country
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has
histroic
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historic
sides and moments. There are some who feel it has less value and government pulls it down. In my opinion, these are the greatest assets of every
country
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and citizens should
respect
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them.
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, if we will see that historic
things
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are priceless to their
country
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. Tourist comes from all over the world to a specific area to see their
things
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for
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example, visitors especially comes to visit their classical building,
things
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etc.
This
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is a great source for
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country
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the country
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to generate income. Tourists become happy and return to their
country
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back.
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,
people
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from all over the world visit to Taj Mahal, which is a great Indian historic building. Indians
respect
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them and can't imagine breaking
this
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building.
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increased
income
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its income
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because of these old
buildings
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. I agree that we should not break these historic
buildings
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.
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,
people
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also
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are also
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interested to construct new modern
buildings
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. Most
people
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have no
respect
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for their old cultural
buildings
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. They want to construct new
buildings
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. They don't know the value of antique
buildings
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. I feel bad for these
people
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and
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country
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the country
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because they don't know that they are losing something valuable which they get to know the letter.
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, if they break all these kinds of building the
tourist's
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majority decreases and the income of that
country
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also
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decreases. I do not agree to build modern
buildings
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instead
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of old
buildings
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. In conclusion, we explained both sides of the essay, We should always
respect
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old
things
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may
it
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they
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be
buildings
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,
people
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etc. I agree that we should build modern
buildings
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but we should not break old
buildings
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as well because these old structures are an identification of the
country
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • invaluable assets
  • tangible connection
  • architectural heritage
  • modernization
  • energy efficiency
  • adaptive reuse
  • historical significance
  • economic implications
  • sustainable
  • green technologies
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