A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts.It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter * Describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team * Summarize the benefits of paying for the concerts * Say how you think the company should spend the money

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to give my opinion about your plan in my place that there are two choices whether you have made a decision to become a sponsor for children's sports team or organize two outdoor concerts. I would like to inform you that it would be great if you could sponsor adolescent sports groups because it will trigger many teenagers to be engaged in football,volleyball and basketball.
That is
why they will avoid bad addictions. I
also
believe that organising two open-air concerts will be entertaining for local people.They need ceremonies so as to de-stress because everyone passed through difficult times during covid pandemic. I would like to express my own view.Supporting a child's physical activity would be much more beneficial than paying for live performance.
This
is simply because the
first
verdict has a long-lasting positive impact on society. On behalf of all of my family members,I would like to thank you for your help and support. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki
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