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More people are now behaving more violently in society than before. Can this behaviour be prevented? Discuss the causes and reasons for this trend. Provide examples to support your opinion.

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In globalization and modern ,life everything is made for more comfort. Of course, the education sphere is up to dating
also
. Everyone can get knowledge from the internet or TV. But I strongly believe that the role of
teachers
 is irreplaceable, despite the many benefits of the internet or other sources. The period of education for me is the main part of life which determines the future. For
this
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 I prefer taking essential knowledge from a
qualificated
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qualified
 teacher who has professional skills. As I know tutors from school or university were educated not for their narrow specialization only, but they are good psychologists at the same time.
This
 helps to determine the loyalty of
students
 and teach in the right way. In my opinion, it is more productive to give information according to the mental and emotional state  of the student.
Moreover
,
teachers
 can identify
student's
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 weak sides, point out their mistakes
then
finally
 set individual programmes. Even by analyzing and giving correct ,
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 they are able to develop
students'
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  own skills, which the computer is definitely not capable of.  One more reason for my agreement is the classroom atmosphere. In special education ,location the attention of
students
 is rightly toward
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learning material, and there is less chance of being disturbed.
Furthermore
, group tasks, working with
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 and
spirit
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 of rivalry help increase and fix up a new theme, certainly
teachers
 observe and manage
this
 process. The school environment and
teachers
' professionalism motivate
students
 and make them confident.  I think
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 it's  very important at the beginning of the learning path.  In conclusion, it appears that it's  possible to find everything on the internet.
However
, I'm  sure, that knowledge should be taken under supervision, and coached by professionals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • violent behavior
  • society
  • prevention
  • causes
  • trend
  • exposure to violence
  • media
  • positive role models
  • psychological issues
  • socioeconomic factors
  • proper education
  • values
  • peer pressure
  • neglectful parenting
  • substance abuse
  • social support
  • community cohesion
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