The most school offers some type of physical education program to their students. Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?

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mental and physically fit. It should be required in every

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essay. Nowadays physical education is not provided in all

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should be healthy and active if they participate

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classes on daily basis. It improves the stamina of the body and keeps the mind refreshed. It prevents students of different

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of diseases and disorders.

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, if children do exercise on daily basis like in

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, it keeps them fresh. able to think more, more active etc. so I think every

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healthy and fit.

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of programmes and as a

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result people are not physically fit. They are involved in different

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of diseases. They are not mentally active to do any work.

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, if they don't care about health and body and they don't do exercise regularly, they become lazy and dull. In the class, they are not active and present mind. As the result, their marks will become low. In conclusion, all

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should offer these

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to keep them fit and active in class and at home as well. If the children get energetic and

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power to think, work and create,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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The most school offers some type of physical education program to their students. Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?

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