While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain what happened, - apologise for the accident, - tell your friend what you plan to do about the bowl.

Dear John, I
hope
you are doing well! I
hope
you are enjoying your vacation in Singapore. Actually, I want to tell you something important, I was playing with your dog in the living area and mistakenly, I hit the glass bowl kept at the
center
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of the dining table. The
one
your uncle gave you on your Birthday. Unfortunately,
one
side gets broken. I am really for that I
hope
you will forgive me. I tried to fix the broken side with fevicol but sadly got no success. I am feeling very guilty right now but I have no other option.
However
, I got
one
new bowl of the same colour and look, it's not exactly the same of course but looks similar at
first
sight.
Moreover
, I am thinking that we should keep the broken bowl on the bookshelf
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so that no
one
will notice its broken side.
Also
, I think
this
way you can keep that piece of decoration at your home too. I
hope
you will forgive me. All the best. Looking forward to seeing you. Regards, Shikha
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