Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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globalization

is growing

people

of the

world

and eliminating national identity.it goes without saying, that in many cases the globalized

world

, we are living in, happens at the expense of local traditions. The

world

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if

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full of

people

who express indifference to local customs in favour of embracing global ideas, but luckily, there are still

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number of

people

who see the value and importance of maintaining them. I strongly believe that we must preserve our traditional way of life. At the outset,

globalization

has

influences

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modern

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people

a lot. Technology and social networks e part of our daily life, which seem to dominate

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time of youngsters, whether it

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gadgets or the internet.

As a result

, some local trends became global trends sometimes at no time at all.

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, during the

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such

application

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as TikTok became mega popular.

People

just make and post funny or curious videos of themselves and

people

all around the

world

are watching them and copying their trends.

In addition

, in the majority of

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you can hear just English, which is obviously the language of the

world

but it

make

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other languages less important on

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international platforms.

Moreover

, nowadays

people

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prefer

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orefer

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prefer

listening to Maluma, Karol G and Rosalia rather than local singers, who are

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part o their local

culture

. Youth enjoy trying new foreign food more

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eating typical traditional recipes

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because they see them as dull or old-fashioned stuff.

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,

personally

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I think that it would be a great mistake to forget about our own

culture

,

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and become one vague

culture

with no clear customs and traditions. Though, it

true

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and

globalization

is getting stronger and stronger day to day, as

people

travel a lot,

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modern technology and

that is

great actually. we should meet different cultures but that doesn’t mean that we should forget about our roots. So we must celebrate typical holidays, cook traditional food and have those simple typical for u country conversation in order to preserve our local

culture

from extinction. By the way, regarding music, if we take a look at Rosalia’s music we will see that her art embodies various musical styles like R&B, art pop, flamenco,

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so she managed to adapt to the

world

of

globalization

without losing her cultural identity. In conclusion,

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I totally agree that

globalization

is destroying national identity by saying that there is no space in their lives for outpaced things from the past and there is no better thing

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being the man of the

world

. I strongly believe that we must do our best to preserve our local

culture

in order

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ancestors can enjoy it and see the way we used to live. But I have to admit I would struggle without the Internet nowadays as I got used to it.