Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one?

It is a common phenomenon among school-going
students
to have their mobile
phones
. Mobile
phones
not only contribute to learning purpose but
also
helps them to keep connected to their parents while they are away from them. But school authorities are restricting their
students
to
use
mobile
phones
on their campus. I believe it is a positive approach as it will help the
students
to stay focused on their
studies
while they are on campus. At the same time,
this
initiative will reduce the health hazards happening
by
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mobile
phone
radiation.
Also
, it will develop their socializing quality. Restricting the
use
of mobile
phones
will keep the student's concentration completely on their
studies
.
Although
the
use
of mobile
phones
can help a lot in
studies
, still it can distract a lot while studying. When any notification pops up on mobile
this
can kill about 10 to 15 minutes or even more as it provokes them to check their notifications, reply to messages and browse their social media accounts. And teachers can't refrain from sneakily using their mobile
phones
in the
classroom
.
For example
, I remember one day when I was in my class and suddenly a notification pooped up on my cellphone and when I was checking that sneaking from my teacher, I could not realize how 20 minutes has passed and I missed most of the important points of that lecture. So, I can say that using mobile
phones
in the
classroom
can have a long-term negative effect on the
studies
of
the
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students
. So, it is crucial to restrict the
use
of mobile
phones
in schools to keep
students
deeply focused on their
studies
. Using
cell
phones
can cause health hazards too. As
cell
phones
have radiation so
this
can disrupt a person's sleeping cycle, have negative effects on the eyes, obesity, and so on. So, if schools restrict using
cell
phones
in the
classroom
then
it will substantially reduce the side effects of using
cell
phones
at the same time it will encourage
students
to develop their social skills. Some surveys have shown that the
use
of
cell
phones
has reduced human contact.
As a result
, today's kids are becoming socially inactive. They do not talk to anyone, they do not go outside to play with others. It has increased the risk of obesity and lack of physical exercise
also
they are not gaining any people skill which is crucial for their career.
For instance
, I have a cousin who uses a mobile
phone
from the age of 12 as his parents do the job outside
that is
why they give a cellphone to their son to contact him.
As a result
, he does not have any friends, his sleeping cycle is disrupted, he has to
use
glasses after 2 months of using his mobile
phone
, his teachers complained about him using his mobile
phone
in the
classroom
several times, he is obese and he does not talk to anyone in his class. These things are going to hamper his future. To conclude, I support the idea of restricting the
use
of
the
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mobile
phone
in school as it is for the betterment of the
students
.
This
approach will not only help them physically but
also
mentally and socially.
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