More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks

Nowadays, many youngsters are opting to study abroad for their tertiary education. In my

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while there are some marginal drawbacks of foreign studies, there are far more significant benefits to be gained with

this

move. Admittedly, there are some minor disadvantages of studying abroad as one can get homesick, In other ,words

students

start missing their

families

back at

home

and feel lonely and sometimes may lead to poor academic performance,

This

can be overcome by regular video chatting at

home

and they will not miss their

families

and start meeting people and make new friends around them to feel like family around. Another potential drawback is that culture shock the way people dress as

this

may make them feel uncomfortable

hence

students

should not bother on

such

things that impact their studies

Furthermore

, the

home

cook food

also

they start missing and

this

can be resolved by bring food spices from

home

country

and cook their own food to feel like

home

style.

On the other hand

, there are major benefits of

further

studies in developed countries as

students

will have

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overseas qualification which is very much in demand in today’s job market.For ,example obtaining a degree from the United States of America kind of

country

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apply broader knowledge that you can bring to your

country

and practise locally to improve the business-developed strategies in their countries .

Moreover

, studying overseas gives one a higher chance to migrate

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develop nation successfully as they are already aware of developed countries living styles and cultures and

hence

can absorb them quickly .

Finally

,

students

gain a good knowledge of

new

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country

's cultures and values which he or they can opt-in their

families

to improve living standards. In conclusion, it is highly recommended for today’s children to join foreign universities for their betterment and for their

country

as well, as they can earn in good currency and send money to

families

in their

country

which they can you to purchase goods and services and add to the economy ,

Although

this

has some disadvantages as outlined in my essay ,but can bring more benefits for betterment as a whole.