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You have just an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town Centre is different from most other town centers. Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of one of the most beautiful cities in India
that is
 "Chandigarh". I just read your article in your newspaper "The Hindu" about the similarity between all the town centres in our country. Though I would agree with some of the instances that you have mentioned like the shopping malls, tourist places, traffic, etc., I might have different views on other aspects, which differentiate between each and every city centre in India. According to me, every township can be bifurcated on the basis of its environment, happiness, greenery, etc.
For example
, if we compare Chandigarh and Delhi, both have adequate infrastructure.
However
, they have a lot of dissimilarities, in terms of, pollution, cleanliness, living style of everyone, etc.
Therefore
, to make you aware of these distinct factors, I would like to offer you a tour in which I will personally take you through all of it. I hope you will be able to get an overview of the dissimilarities that every township would have.
Also
, I am looking to hearing from your side, and your response to my offer. With Regards, Shivam
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